Review and Critique Thread

Give constructive criticism and feedback to your fellow artists.
No lazyposters, no reccs, no generic compliments, really dig deep and give meaningful opinions.

DO NOT get offended if someone says your music sucks.

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soundcloud.com/alexander_avila/forgive-the-mess
darkmatternebula.bandcamp.com
soundcloud.com/dmn2398/umbral
youtube.com/watch?v=bkKUETAOV6k
soundcloud.com/music-for-alaska-nights/flowers
youtube.com/watch?v=BJoODn-FlSQ
soundcloud.com/hangdownyrheadtomdooley/april-8th
soundcloud.com/twenty-foureyes/spring
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soundcloud.com/alexander_avila/forgive-the-mess

>pop jazz rock shit
>synth shit
>crack
>bass
>songwriter shit
>post-homosexual
>breakbeat

I would also use the OG copypasta

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Yas Forums is gonna be mad op
too many threads again

darkmatternebula.bandcamp.com
>post-apocalypse
>industrial

a palate cleanser if you don't want the noises above
soundcloud.com/dmn2398/umbral
>minimal

trap's not my thing but at least you have better vocals than darkie

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Your music would benefit a lot by better mixing/mastering. The composition itself is cool but the mix is quite flat and dead sounding.


youtube.com/watch?v=bkKUETAOV6k
>New Age / Smooth Jazz / Cult / Sample Free

This album has a cool concept that you can read in the description of the video. I usually make synthwave music but decided to dabble in more new agey sounding stuff.

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NEW SONG OUT NOW!!!!

soundcloud.com/music-for-alaska-nights/flowers

>spring is here!
>passionate pop
>lush folk
>flowers everywhere

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totally recc this. as I said in a previous thread, this is one of the most beautifully lush tracks I've heard on here. the vocals are good, the synths are exquisite. honestly 10/10

also reccin this, in a more experimental genre

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will return all feedback!

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youtube.com/watch?v=BJoODn-FlSQ

Here's our newest release. Let us know if it's any good.

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Welcome to /feedback/

This thread is to post your work and GIVE AND RECEIVE feedback, criticism, and comments from other Yas Forumssicians.

Quick guidelines:

1. Post a link to ONE track, and if you want, a description. Don't spam your EP, playlist or 20 links.
2. Give feedback to AT LEAST one other person in this thread. NO "recc". Give actual, specific feedback.
3. If you shill and leave without posting feedback, you will be ignored.
4. Do not make another thread until this one dies.

Try to follow each other and like each other's works. The best way to get plays is by building a community. Ignore lazyposting shills, and have fun!

I covered NMH.

soundcloud.com/hangdownyrheadtomdooley/april-8th

>dream pop
>lush synths
>mellotron
>psychedelic
>orchestral influence

This is really cool. Some of the songs remind me of gamecube game beach level soundtracks (that's a good thing). I feel like a lot of it is city-poppish, but it could just be because of the upbeat midi instruments. Really well done and even more impressive knowing it's sample free.

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soundcloud.com/twenty-foureyes/spring

>Ambient

It's been been over a year and a half since I uploaded anything but I guess now is as good as time as any to start releasing new music.

Let me know what you think!

Really interesting sounds man, I love the part after 1:52, really dark. What kind of gear do you use? The mix is very nice too, great use of panning.

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DO NOT get offended if someone says your music sucks

cause if you have to remind people of the other things, this should be one of them