>overarching story
Heli has the cure to the disease in her blood and is being hunted by an evil corporation who want to harvest her blood and sell the cute for profit or only offer it to the wealthy elite. Something like that
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David Long
Jayden Baker
I wanna see this series on mangafox
Kayden Mitchell
why do redditors feel like we need to work on projects or some shit? We're here to discuss anime and manga make make our own fanfiction garbage?
Jaxson Harris
Is the setting in any of the docs? I didn't see it and it's important
Carson Long
>All characters are main, just some characters are more main than others
What if we make Heli more mature and tough then?
It seems unrealistic that she would have that cute hair and outfit in a post apocaliptic hell scape.
Joseph Smith
Stock image I found and tried to clean up, market maybe?
Cameron Bennett
Fine, whatever. I'll throw something together.
>page 1
intro page
>page 2
jump immediately to the deal gone bad between the delivery guys and Legs
>page 3
Heli-chan grabs a box/bag/whatever of food and runs while they're distracted
>page 4 (+5, or however many the artist feels are needed)
Short chase scene where Legs goes after her, but she tries to fly away
>page 5
Legs corners her and they exchange words
>page 6
Legs takes the food back from her (and maybe leaves her something) and starts headed back to the truck
>page 7
Legs gets back to the truck to see it's under attack by Pompador
>page 8
Chapter ends on a cliffhanger page where Legs and Pompador are about to throw down
There. A third pitch that follows a similar format, but with a more immediate opening, heavier emphasis on Legs, and an appearance by the third main character. If you need three for a vote, you now have three.
Carson Anderson
It's faggy, I know, but I honestly would want to read a manga put together on Yas Forums
Sebastian Nguyen
Thats why none of this feels like it has the identity of Yas Forums
Andrew Ortiz
>being this new