Open Milestones: O Writing down about 3 possible versions of the first chapter O Let the everyone vote about it in the strawpoll O Cleaning up the main doc and removing/archiving unnecessary images.
he should have an interesting job that allow's them to get into conflicts.
Maybe he's a muscle for hire, he was protecting the food truck but they were about to fuck him up with less pay.
They get a job to guard a plot device and Heli-chan joins him. the job was actually a set-up and the anti-infected were supposed to get it. but pompadour comes to accidentally save the day.
How about we bring back Heli-chan being the immune? The non-infected/plague doctors are the only ones knowing this and hunt her down. Legs sense that something is wrong and protect her.
Benjamin Perry
Drafts of the purgers
Can someone from the last thread write a short story synopsis?
This is how the anti-infected can actively have eyes on the two heroes. Maybe Heli lets one escape or they dont kill any of them at all.
Lincoln Russell
No, have the conflict be that his employer left out some information when hiring him. Either he refuses to work for whoever he found out is paying him or the job is way too dangerous for the pay he agreed to.
Gabriel Wright
what a shitty OP, learn to use your meme arrows and don't make it look like a general either
David Gonzalez
She should black out after they fall thorugh the roof. After than Legs helps her..
Ethan Mitchell
Post them into the google docs, the editors will consult everything and put up strawpolls later on.
William Richardson
So we should have it as an established trait that Legs avoids sticking his neck out for the sake of preservation. It would be a nice contrast to Heli who I imagine may be on the impulsive side of good.
Hunter Scott
Put an infopic in OP if possible, makes people more aware of our currento possition
We should be carefull to make it not look like a general, but then again mods allow Yas Forums sings and other threads like that to remain up. Also they haven't removed any threads yet so we might be in the clear.
One thing I notice that I haven't seen elaborated on is what exactly the setting is. I can't get a good feel for what the "slums" are.
Kayden Torres
The mc is a girl though.
Robert Gomez
I think we need a strawpoll to decide whether or not this manga is yuri
Nicholas Watson
L.A. post-corona
Ryder Garcia
>legs do shady jobs for money >usually mundane things like stealing or debt collecting >one day he's told the job is to kidnap a girl >said girl is Heli-chan
Anthony Wright
we haven't voted I thought the editors were waiting for a 3rd proposal to make the straw.
I do like that one tho.
Cameron Adams
Urban, deserted and poor but not the smelly favelas yet
Jaxon Cooper
yes, specifically because those threads don't look like generals. that's all it is. "2, "edition", "continuation" and such will get the thread nuked.
Isaiah Myers
strawpoll.me/19869818 She'll remain a central character no matter what but if the people are against her being the main character they can change it
There's an ! in the title. Correct me if I'm wrong, but I believe that's a forbidden love indicator.
Jaxson Rogers
That is usually the case. We need the female potential love interest for the female MC
Blake Rogers
Mods have mercy
Brandon Lopez
If anyone has a better idea sure, if not I think that's a good chapter and having the first one done may get the ball rolling so why not start right away
Andrew Howard
It has been established that all three of them are the MCs though
Liam Gutierrez
>We need the female potential love interest for the female MC make it a milf/christmas cake. age difference yuri is the best.
Gabriel Torres
I'm retarded
Jace White
i like the idea that legs does shady stuff and maybe the reason he followed heli is because the vendor is legs' friend and he wouldnt want his friend to be stolen from (showing a good side to someone with a shady job) but i wouldnt want heli to be super special MC their meeting in the first chapter doc is just coincidental we still dont have an overarcing story per se (i think)
Oliver Peterson
All characters are main, just some characters are more main than others
William Thomas
IDK I rarely see serious female mc in manga that are not fanserviced into oblivion.
Aaron Garcia
Legs is pretty old, did he have a family before the virus hit?
David Long
>overarching story Heli has the cure to the disease in her blood and is being hunted by an evil corporation who want to harvest her blood and sell the cute for profit or only offer it to the wealthy elite. Something like that
Jayden Baker
I wanna see this series on mangafox
Kayden Mitchell
why do redditors feel like we need to work on projects or some shit? We're here to discuss anime and manga make make our own fanfiction garbage?
>All characters are main, just some characters are more main than others What if we make Heli more mature and tough then? It seems unrealistic that she would have that cute hair and outfit in a post apocaliptic hell scape.
Joseph Smith
Stock image I found and tried to clean up, market maybe?
>page 2 jump immediately to the deal gone bad between the delivery guys and Legs
>page 3 Heli-chan grabs a box/bag/whatever of food and runs while they're distracted
>page 4 (+5, or however many the artist feels are needed) Short chase scene where Legs goes after her, but she tries to fly away
>page 5 Legs corners her and they exchange words
>page 6 Legs takes the food back from her (and maybe leaves her something) and starts headed back to the truck
>page 7 Legs gets back to the truck to see it's under attack by Pompador
>page 8 Chapter ends on a cliffhanger page where Legs and Pompador are about to throw down
There. A third pitch that follows a similar format, but with a more immediate opening, heavier emphasis on Legs, and an appearance by the third main character. If you need three for a vote, you now have three.
Carson Anderson
It's faggy, I know, but I honestly would want to read a manga put together on Yas Forums
Sebastian Nguyen
Thats why none of this feels like it has the identity of Yas Forums
Andrew Ortiz
>being this new
Sebastian Taylor
>redditors are the only people that can work on projects
Isaiah Roberts
Dumb newshit.
Gabriel Evans
Something a bit like It's not the typical super-special shounen MC, but it still make the MC unique without giving her too much power. Perhaps he had a family and daughter before, they got corona'd and he protect Heli because he see his daughter in her or something like that.
