Howdy fellow Yas Forumssicians, some of you may know me as Yung Ugly Bastard, perhaps even as YUB, but regardless, tonight I want to listen to what you have to offer. I haven't done one of these in over a month and I'm bored with nothing else to do. Link your track, give me a short run-down and description, and I'll give you my input for the next hour or so. Now, my headphones aren't exactly in best quality right now (the right one recently went out) so take what I say with a grain of salt. I hope to see some great works! Remember: my opinion is my own, and does not represent the overall consensus, so do not get upset if I dislike something, and also, please understand reviewing ambient tracks and such is nearly impossible to give criticism to beyond "nice atmosphere" so don't expect too much if you're posting a track like that.
I'm only going to listen to the first track. 1 feels extremely repetitive and too reliant on simple patterns to have any real replayablitiy. It also feels bare bones in terms of content. There's not a whole lot that makes this track attractive or engaging. It leaves me desiring more from it rather than leaving me fulfilled
A bit rough and a very niche kind of song. The rhythm is catchy and the contrast between the normal and crushed audio is appealing. Not my thing but not bad. Feels more like an introduction to something else rather than a standalone piece.
I have no idea what the vocals are saying. It just sounds like a generic rock song. The production quality isn't bad but the mastering and mixing needs work, the instrumental is nothing special, but im just confused why youre advertising in English but promoting a non English song? The vocals need touch up, the singing is pitchy at points.
Daniel Nguyen
Good catch. Its the title track of an EP youtu.be/0Cs24JZhvW4 Check it out sometime
Incredibly boring, redundant, and in all honesty a waste of time. The same notes over and over with just someone hitting a drum. There is no music to be had here nor entertainment. This feels incredibly forced, lazy, and pretentious considering the image is Adam Lanza
Joseph Harris
I wanna put this one on a new project I’m about to drop but I’m kinda antsy about it idk, lmk what you think
The pacing on the instrumental is great. Very energertic and had me moving. I just think you should put more emotion behind the vocals. There's a disconnect between what your words are saying and what your voice is. I also feel the lyrics are incredibly simple and I think maybe you should add another different verse. You've got the production quality, you've got the rhythm and flow in the instruments, you just need to work on vocals imbred and you got a real hit man. Its just the delivery isn't really consumer friendly and is harsh to get adjusted to.
Alexander White
There's a handful of problems, one in every category. Vocals need more practice with pitch and hitting the right notes. The mixing is obviously off and it just leaves everything off balance. The mastering is also in dire need of assistance. Just feels like a generic love song that plays during a chick flick when the couple breaks up. The instrumental isnt too bad, but the overall quality is incredibly low
Its incredibly loud. Turn the volume down. Like seriously. I had it at 1% and it still hurt my ears. Nothing really special, just sounds like some generic video game music. I don't understand what makes this incelcore beyond just naming it that. It's a safe, inoffensive track that feels like it belongs in a megaman game more than it does Yas Forums. Not awful, but painfully generic.
Joseph Hall
Actually really good. Reminded me of some daft punk shit. The timing on drops is excellent, I felt engaged the whole time, and it was a extremely fun track to listen to. I couldn't have asked for more. Should definitely make more. You got an instagram i could follow or something? Really damn good job user.
Noah Bailey
Ok
Mason Gray
i don't have social media thanks a lot :-)
Mason Martin
I'm sorry man, but I have no idea how to judge a remix especially when I have no idea how the original sounds. For all I know, this is exactly how the base track sounds like. I mean it's funky with that bass but I feel the sample is too repetitive. There's not enough contrast to make anything stand out
Nathan Ross
you don't know Fat Joe??? what are you, 5???
I can understand it sounding a little repetitive though. I'm mostly looking for some advice on the mixing. Thanks for the feed back, all the same!
Jason Robinson
Ive heard of Fat Joe, but I don't listen to his music, and haven't heard that one (or at Least don't think I have) and can't give a fair evaluation on the quality of a track that is a remix.
Carson Ward
understandable, no hard feelings.
Jaxon Wilson
I think you Shouldve gone for the verse the 2nd riding round town when the beat was building up. It had be vibing. By the third try it feels a bit drawn out. I think the beat doesn't really mesh with the vocals. Just feels a bit awkward. I think you Shouldve gone for a more fast paced, high octane and aggresive delivery rather than just kind of floating on top of the beat.
Zachary Moore
I thought it was pretty simple and clean. Nothing much to see but as background noise its harmless. Theres not a whole lot to consume here. I think the bit crushed audio part is an odd choice. Overall pretty inoffensive and just another background track
Christian Powell
Well that's it for the night. I got through everyone and im pretty damn tired so ima hit the sack. Nice getting to listen to everyone's work. Goodnight. Peace and love
