/feedback/

Welcome to /feedback/

This thread is to post your work and GIVE AND RECEIVE feedback, criticism, and comments from other Yas Forumssicians.

Quick guidelines:

1. Post a link to ONE track, and a description. Don't spam your EP, playlist or 20 links.
2. Give feedback to AT LEAST one other person in this thread. NO "recc". Give actual, specific feedback.
3. If you shill and leave without posting feedback, you will be ignored.
4. Do not make another thread until this one dies.
5. Do NOT get mad if someone says your music sucks. Make better music, and take the criticism.

Try to follow each other and like each other's works. The best way to get plays is by building a community. Ignore lazyposting shills, and have fun!

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Other urls found in this thread:

m.youtube.com/watch?v=341WvP6X4nk
youtu.be/SRsw41BS5n0
cmrv.bandcamp.com/album/visitantes-ep
soundcloud.com/c_m_r_v/sets/visitantes
soundcloud.com/prettyoverpowered/your-good-time
soundcloud.com/fishermandan/blueberry
soundcloud.com/drowningstars/lagoon
anal-catharsis.bandcamp.com/album/botched-perineoplasty
soundcloud.com/razorrheadmusic
youtube.com/watch?v=pNMQyKixi8A&t=45s
simoncameronfletcher.bandcamp.com/
soundcloud.com/juntaro97/
soundcloud.com/toybreaker/684counting-sheep
soundcloud.com/joeslem/fishbowl
auxmind.bandcamp.com/album/locked-works
soundcloud.com/yunguglybastard/glass-accordian-prod-blank
soundcloud.com/mephisto_waltz/mephisto-waltz-full-set
soundcloud.com/thad-schramm/the-tower
soundcloud.com/dangerfruit/the-only-thing-i-remember-is-you
soundcloud.com/lion_trail/hold-my-hand-and-never-let-go
youtu.be/dUbcmSE-HCc
soundcloud.com/jakub-kub-ni/sets/whale-hunter-ep
youtu.be/yqT6MxCc75g
soundcloud.com/morphine-inhaler/breaking
youtube.com/watch?v=6bXlTZsU9Cc&feature=youtu.be
soundcloud.com/vaxiobois/decay
soundcloud.com/slave-beaver-revolt/the-st-paddys-day-massacre
youtu.be/PDGDun6k1aU
soundcloud.com/goldenboy808/zone-of-ages
twitter.com/SFWRedditGifs

Track I made for Terry Davis.
m.youtube.com/watch?v=341WvP6X4nk

Just uploaded this thing I half improvised last year.

youtu.be/SRsw41BS5n0

Alsoooo
my second EP

cmrv.bandcamp.com/album/visitantes-ep

soundcloud.com/c_m_r_v/sets/visitantes

>electronic
>aggressive
>idk what type of electronic

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NEW SONG THIS WEEKEND

soundcloud.com/prettyoverpowered/your-good-time

>alternative

very buzzy

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soundcloud.com/fishermandan/blueberry

>Electronic rock
>spacey
>Synth pop
>Intrumental
>Soundtrack

I release tracks almost daily, hope u find something u like

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Nice track. The switch in tempo was cool.
This puts me in a good mood.

soundcloud.com/drowningstars/lagoon

>ambient
>ethereal

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MILITANT POSER STOMPING FOLK ANNIHILATION FROM HELL

anal-catharsis.bandcamp.com/album/botched-perineoplasty

>new demo
>improvised
>folk
>noisy
>harsh vocals
>vomit and violence

Woah dude this is really awesome, might be the best vocal preformance I've seen on one of these threads. The synth solo starting at 2:30 into the soft piano section has that perfect contrast. This gives me a very strong tobacco vibe but with a much stronger human element

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soundcloud.com/razorrheadmusic

youtube.com/watch?v=pNMQyKixi8A&t=45s

>Rap
>Electronic
>Industrial

Good to see this guy is still around, his music is deff worth checking out. looking forward to the new song.

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simoncameronfletcher.bandcamp.com/

also:
soundcloud.com/juntaro97/

>acoustic jangle pop
>depression pop
>sounds like alex g, or daniel johnston, or guided by voices, or sebadoh

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soundcloud.com/toybreaker/684counting-sheep

>sample based
>beats
NEW BEAT UP

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Brand spankin' new song, check it my dudes

soundcloud.com/joeslem/fishbowl
>OneDudeLotsOfInstruments

Very slick improv, have you ever considered making sample packs for other people? There's a lot of those 7 minutes that are ripe for sampling my dude. Visitantes has some sick percussion at 2:12, very nice synth aswell. Liked and followed.

Been watching y'all for awhile now, consistently good shit. If anyone hasn't checked them out yet they should do that immediately.

Pretty spacious beat, but kinda chill. Feel like it need some more percussion elements.

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auxmind.bandcamp.com/album/locked-works
some files i had on my hard drive
[13 track, unreleased, exclusive, super rare works]
>electronic

feels like im floating in space and observing an ancient city simultaneously. very cool!!
super 80s feel, i love the synths you used.
this is very good and i will probably listen to it again.

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soundcloud.com/yunguglybastard/glass-accordian-prod-blank
>Punk Rap
>Loud Aggressive Bass
>Over the top vocals

The audio quality in Lost in Mexico City seems off. Id suggest buying/using better equipment to record with. I felt that it was dragged on for way longer than needed and in all honesty, I got bored. It really didn't offer anything crazy, unique, or interesting. It was tiresome, repetitive, and unappealing to be brutally truthful.
I feel the mixing was a bit off. Seems the vocals are a tiny bit quieter than the beat. Id say work on enunciation to really get the emphasis on certain words and switch up between speed and volume to give momentum a bigger contrast to really make everything pop. I also think the track is too long, try to aim for 2 minutes if you ask me

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soundcloud.com/mephisto_waltz/mephisto-waltz-full-set

>Noise, Drone, Ambient

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there was already a sc thread, why'd you make this

>4. Do not make another thread until this one dies.

The other one was focused on feedback.

shameful lazy posters. Begone!

soundcloud.com/thad-schramm/the-tower
>Ambient
>16 minutes long


In the video, the playing sounds great. I wish the recording was a little cleaner. Visitantes is still great though.

nice synths. i enjoyed that.

good grove. well mixed.

super nice vaporwave-ish vibe.

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soundcloud.com/dangerfruit/the-only-thing-i-remember-is-you
>indie rock

hot damn, them changes

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I didn't make that one. Some asshole tried to make me look bad and namefagged as me, i never namefag.

i'm talking about this thread

>hard rock, Indie, stoner rock, psychedelic rock

soundcloud.com/lion_trail/hold-my-hand-and-never-let-go

youtu.be/dUbcmSE-HCc

I like the darker feel here than your other stuff. How do you produce such things every month is beyond me
Love the guitar tone, the writing and vocals.
The mix could be better, kick and snare are barely there, try to make them.cut. I like how the guitars and ocals mix, great song.

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Just uploaded my first EP

>black metal, shoegaze, instrumental

soundcloud.com/jakub-kub-ni/sets/whale-hunter-ep

youtu.be/yqT6MxCc75g

Dude I don't know what you're talking about, honestly. Someone's been impersonating me. I dont know why you think i did it, but please believe i didnt

probably faqqi

soundcloud.com/morphine-inhaler/breaking

>ambient
>?

Good atmosphere , nice changes , keeps it interesting for the duration .
Those synths are fantastic . good job man
The mixing could use a little polish and a bit of variety would be nice but other than that it's pretty good

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this is great. really loved the intro on the first track.

NEW SINGLE WITH VISUALIZER

youtube.com/watch?v=6bXlTZsU9Cc&feature=youtu.be

soundcloud.com/vaxiobois/decay

>emoviolence
>screamo
>short burst of energy
>high screaming vocals

I listened to "Bong is Taiwanese for Chalice", i think that one couldve used vocals.

Nice Synths and soundscapes, the samples keep it alive throughout.

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thanks. your track has a nice lonely feel to it. i like it.

soundcloud.com/slave-beaver-revolt/the-st-paddys-day-massacre

Just updated with a tighter mix.

>hard rock
>black metal
>quarantine music

recc

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youtu.be/PDGDun6k1aU

reccs
nice vocals man

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That bass does something to me man. Very good stuff, I love it. Feels like it could be in the movie drive. Rec
You did a good ass chopping the samples. This is really chill and great. Drums do a great job as well if not being overpowered. Rec
Bro your stuff is great! The guitar playing was dope, the groove you got into was dope, your section where you started rapping was good as well. I wanna hear more stuff from you man!

soundcloud.com/goldenboy808/zone-of-ages

> melodic beat
> kinda trap ish
> hip hop
> maybe rap over it?


Love you all! Wash your hands! I’ll return all feedback in soundcloud! New beat probably coming soon

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