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soundcloud.com/yunguglybastard/glass-accordian-prod-blank >Punk Yell Rap >Loud Blown Out Bass >Hype Aggresive Vocals Hope you all enjoy! All feedback is appreciated and I'll try to return any that's given! I like the lofi tone, its very nice, but i feel the track is way too repetitive and simple. It feels, in all honesty, a bit lazy. The first half of the track is really boring, but the 2nd half feels more inspired and has more to offer but that transition middle felt awkward and squished in.
>emoviolence >screamo >short burst of energy >high screaming vocals
The drum switch is well done, but the whole thing feels stretched out.
Really dig the guitar sound, the fuzzy tone with the chiptune stuff is a nice combination. The synths give the whole thing a nice touch and keep the track alive.
soundcloud.com/furthershore/come-around-let-u-go-mix new song, i appreciate any luv + feedback. >jungle >drum n' bass >dreamy/ethereal let love grow is a lo-fi gem, loved those riffs right away. . responded to that song already in another thread but i was peeping hibernation and the track name fits the mood perfectly for that chilled out low-pass filter goodness. aguajena like i said in another thread has some real nice programming with the drums, bass kick was a lil low for me tho.
>4. Do not make another thread until this one dies. We don't need 47 of these a day, make them last
Fuck you
Juan Rivera
>4. Do not make another thread until this one dies. We don't need 47 of these a day, make them last makes this thread when there are already 5+ threads. lol
Noah Roberts
>Give feedback you dumb fuckign shills >makes this thread 3x a day and has left 3 comments and followed 7 people in half a year
John Bell
deleoneon here. big thanks buddo. once I learn to eq i'll make that bass louder. I'm a big fan of the breaks you got going on, real nice flanger effect too. I feel like you're track could benefit from some more progression, even if subtle. try experimenting with adding some small melodies a couple of bars after the vocal loop comes in. maybe add some more dynamics to the drums at the point too.
>makes this thread 3x a day and has left 3 comments and followed 7 people in half a year Kek, imagine getting so butthurt about being called out about lazyposting your only response is to try and assume who it is. Try again
Angel Rodriguez
k, not foolin anyone
Brandon Sanchez
Tell me, since you're so confident, who exactly do (you) think I am?
Asher Clark
Nice and surfy, like the way you play guitar straight. Some lyrics would be cool too to follow your melodies
No synths, two guitars, and bass, thank you though.
I am a fanny of the tinny drums. Your breathing in is quite noticeable, I would remove that. The ending at 1:05 gives an under the water feeling. I imagine a high pitched beeping noise that follows the drum pattern.
Yes
The lyrics are in the pastebin, will record when I finish them. You also linked my track instead of your own.
Ryder Nguyen
Ok, I noticed I replied here
Easton Butler
Yea i left the breathing in intentionally, supposed to add to the rawness and give it a live feel more or less. Can you link me your stuff? I want to check out more.
The mix is awful, it's peaking everywere and needs a lot of polish Try watching videos of homemade mixing for rock bands. Musically speaking sounds really cool tho, I like it, but again, I dont understand nothing from the mix.
really nice playing tho, but needs more bass-like stuff tho. Try playing some walking bass to extend your creativity, but really solid
i know you make shitty music. cause everyone itt besides me does
John Jackson
It’s just a standard vocaroo recording lol. Of course I don’t normally record like this
Liam Young
>This is fucking retarded in a really good way. Shit goes hard as fuck. The vocal delivery was on point. Well that's the first time i heard it described as that, thank you very much. Im glad you liked it. As for your track, I think the singing and instrumental was good, but the vocals are mixed way too low. It's comfy and nice but the mix needs to be fixed. Appreciate the listen!
