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>dream pop >lush synths >mellotron >psychedelic >orchestral influence
Currently listening to bleak after listening to umbral and I’m really impressed with your ability to do both abrasive and soothing stuff really well. The textures in umbral are really impressive and the breaks in bleak are ridiculous. Umbral is the one I’ll probably go back to the most, as there’s a lot of variety in a short work (the glitches early on, the deep rumbling later on, the end where it feels a little darker). I really like this.
Boring and obnoxious. No sense of direction and on top of it all, extremely generic Sounds like it was made by either an angsty 19 year old or 35 year old. If this is dance music chop off my fucking legs now. The drums clash way too much with the lofi and it just doesnt blend well at all Boring ass intro. The vocals aren't that good either. Should hit it with pitch correction. The instrumental is incredibly white bitch basic. Real snoozefest
soundcloud.com/yunguglybastard/glass-accordian-prod-blank >punk rap >loud aggressive vocals >hype blown out bass Hope y'all enjoy! If you do, show your support by liking, reposting, following, and sharing! I do agree with the other user, this track is really boring and incredibly basic, which is bad on its own, but it's 3 min long, and it feels like a strain. The singing needs improvement as well as timing.
>memetexting >>memetexting >>>memetexting So, how's it hanging newfag?
Juan Gutierrez
shit, new track. this is gorgeous dude. the way it builds up with the droning, soft noise and the vocals and the release thereafter are so awesome. Like I said yesterday, you're really bringing the past to the future.
I see 3 rain clouds right now
Josiah Ramirez
Bump
James Garcia
>I do agree with the other user, this track is really boring and incredibly basic, which is bad on its own,
I didn’t write the song. I’ll own up to my singing being awful, but the composition isn’t my fault.
Alexander Hernandez
soundcloud.com/produced_by_jay/covid-quarantine-tings First time rapping on a track. Let me know if my shit is good. Decent cover. Love the spacious vibe and some of the psychedelic effects built in, and you managed to make something different from the original, so that’s always appreciated. I kinda want the bass more distorted, or something else. Like I feel like the vocal performance was hype and intense enough, but like there was something missing from the beat that made it feel like there was an aggression disparity.
I’ve listened and given feedback to most of the rest of the shit here
William Kelly
I think the instrumental sounds a bit off and i think you should try and put more emotion behind your vocals. The timing wasnt bad, but sounding flatline the whole time isn't that good. Also, I think the instrumental sounded a bit off, like it was compressed or something. Work on the mixing.
Liam Flores
Bump
Colton Watson
who are you and why are you bumping the thread 5 mins after the last replies, absolute mong
Aiden Nelson
This is a nice vibe, but I do not like the clipping on those drums got annoying very quickly.
I did not like this. The original works well because the guitar's chord progression mixed with the vocals make the songs modality ambiguous. Sometimes the guitar plays an E major chord, sometimes it plays an E minor chord, and the end result is that the song feels like its in E major or E mixolydian at some points and E minor in others. But you have a droning E major 9 chord on a synth, so the song always feels like it's in E major. And to make things worse, you're playing the original guitar part, so whenever the guitar plays the G in an E minor chord, it clashes with the G# in the synth. Maybe you're doing that on purpose and the dissonance serves some larger purpose that I'm just not intelligent enough to see, but regardless, I didn't like it.
Liked the sounds you chose. But I didn't liked the melodies that much, and also I felt like something was missing about this track. I felt like it was the same all the way.
Beautiful. I heard other track of yours the other day and I didn't liked it that much, because there was like a lot of things going on idk. This track was great, I felt this a lot more cohesive imo. That wall of sound at the end is great.
I like the idea, but I think the riffs and the instrumental of the first half could have been better. It made me think of brainbombs idk why.
I found the first half of the song boring and lackluster, but I'm pretty sure I was just disappointed due to the misleading "psych pop" tag in the description.
>psychadelic rock >lo-fi >or something, just made the song and recorded it in 3 hours, not sure.
First track in over a year, let me know what you think!
Very nice, getting very nice European vibes with a touch of movie soundtrack. Great mix and clarity between instruments.
Not much more to say other than very cozy and beautiful, I especially like when the distorted riff comes in towards the end and it moves into a more ambient direction.
definitely one of the more interesting tracks I've heard on here!
