Review and Critique Thread

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jumbled mess
drums (or bass-line) should be so much deeper than your flat drumworks. Flatline
>textured distortion
that's a meme "participation award"-tier description
same feedback as in the other thread

What the hell? Last time i was here (couple of days ago) the thread has been filled with legit distinct tunes from multiple authors?
My favs so far are
- RZR-XL - consistently good composition, multiple layers of tunes that don't crosstalk over each other;
- Acrobat - understands how to work with soundscape, leaves no unused gaps (King Lemon track);
- Axis Mundi - Empty Angels (just a really good, energetic track with distinct "voice" to it)
- Melancholia - The Noise Machine (good understanding of slow burn beat, recommended for vidya projects)
- Unzeruns by Brændt A[Mp3] (good soundscape, eurojank techno needs more love)

In my opinion, revival of early 2000s breakbit is well overdue and would be ripe af right now

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of course man! show me your stuff

the name's there. i'm above you.

lol how did you get out of Yas Forumshegao reservation?

oh yeah sorry I never pay attention to the name field! launching the track

Are you just an autist who listens to amatuer musicians or do you also make music?
Also, strolling into a thread with 6 posters doesn't really exclude the quality that's gonna come later on.

especially when two of those are shit trap 'artists'

>Are you just an autist who listens to amatuer musicians or do you also make music?
the former
>Also, strolling into a thread with 6 posters doesn't really exclude the quality that's gonna come later on.
never insinuated anything like that

ok, then your opinion's irrelevant as fuck

also, this isn't the first thread i've been checking out today.
the other one was pretty bland, too (albeit, less than 30 replies)
k, don't mind your take on it

man that was good.
1) great mixing throughout the track, couldn't think of something to ameliorate
2) I liked the multi-part aspect of the track, especially the calmer one towards the end
3) if I had one critique to make, it would rather be about your posts. the tags you've chosen ain't telling much imo. to be honest, I always thought you were doing some kind of electronic music project, and that's why I've never checked you out before. I mean, your music's way better than the way you sell it (but then again, that's just my opinion). maybe you should add tags such as 'post rock' or descriptors ('soothing', 'atmospheric' etc)
that should get you the listeners you deserve.

>inb4 nice blog faggot

thanks, but the track's 2 years old and part of my first record on which it was by far the best one and that was the last time also where I made that type of stuff - daw rock type shit
the newer stuff is more electronic tho.
and i don't care about the tags. people will listen if they want to or not regardless of the tags. and if they don't, that's something they have to reason with. don't be afraid to step into unknown territory and make yourself uncomfortable

also
nice blog post faggot

soundcloud.com/arlsuchan

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fair enough

SLUDGE/NOISE ROCK SINGLE

soundcloud.com/vaxiobois/for-educational-purposes-only

youtube.com/watch?v=7UD8VxlEODs

>noise rock
>gothic/dark
>clean/screaming vocals
>tribal noise/ambient section
>sludge switchup

I like the drums, overall a mellow vibe compared to most of your recent stuff. The ending couldve been more out there but ill take it. btw the storm is coming...

Nice atmosphere, the end gets especially intense. Only thing bugging me is that hi-hat, sounds like you left your metronome on.

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new album

soundcloud.com/pkskyler/sets/lost-in-darkness

>experimental hip hop
>trip hop
>chill hop
>sampling
>electronic

you dont have to listen to the whole thing but feedback is appreciated

Cool intro and guitar. I like the loud and yelling vox but the slow dreary ones are not doing it for me. They sound a little nasaly in some instances, unclear, indistinguishable in others and fkinda just going "uhhhhhhohhhhahhhh" along to some sort of semblance to the melody. The yelling vox show some wear in the middle but it sounds better especially when the rapping section begins. The length of the song dragged on a bit, but overall not a major detriment. Would be interested in hearing more with a focus on what exactly you wanna do with the vox. the glitchy noise breakdown was cool, and this has some neat ideas.

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>IDM
>Ambient Techno

soundcloud.com/sun-at-midnight/iso
very different from what I've come to expect from you, but still very charming nonetheless
always happy to see garage posted here
a tad trendy for my taste, but still done well, it's a nice take on a KE song, for sure
very, very nice

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soundcloud.com/slave-beaver-revolt/the-st-paddys-day-massacre

Just updated with a tighter mix.

>hard rock
>black metal
>quarantine music

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FEEDBACK cunt

soundcloud.com/worany/werwer
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