This thread is to post your work and GIVE AND RECEIVE feedback, criticism, and comments from other Yas Forumssicians.
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1. Post a link to ONE track, and a description. Don't spam your EP, playlist or 20 links. 2. Give feedback to AT LEAST one other person in this thread. NO "recc", no "I'll give feedback later", and no "There's no one here I want to/can give feedback to". Challenge yourself, give actual, specific, genuine feedback. 3. If you shill and leave without posting feedback, you will be ignored. 4. Do NOT make another thread while this one is still up. It makes it easier for everyone on Yas Forums.
Try to follow each other and like each other's works. The best way to get plays is by building a community. Ignore lazyposting shills, and have fun! The success of everyone depends on you!
>electronic >aggressive >idk what type of electronic
really good song, that voice is really beautiful. Are you on another streaming service like Soundcloud or Bandcamp? So I can follow you and listen to other stuff of yours :)
>soundcloud.com/c_m_r_v/visitantes-i Haunting vibe, really sweet. Almost like a Bones track instrumental if it was made with 8-bit chips. Great timing on the switchup, Castlevania mood stuff. I really like this track.
Elijah Gonzalez
really liking the focused sound here. very analog but twisted. section with just the bass and drums sounds great especially.
soundcloud.com/yunguglybastard/glass-accordian-prod-blank >Punk Rap >Aggresive Hype Vocals >Loud blown out bass Hope y'all enjoy! All feedback is appreciated! If you do want to support me, leave a like, repost, and follow! I feel the vocal mixing is quiet. I think the singing is nice but there is room for improvement. Just practice some more and pefect it! I also feel if you included more instruments a throughout more of the track it could be benefit from it. Overall not a bad track. It's nice, comfy, and serves its purpose.
Finally a thread where everyone's giving feedback. Except , Fuck him
Henry Peterson
Hey pals, i got some great feedback today. Real helpful stuff.
. **Your music is so garbage that you have to samefag and shill so hard you make dubbi's sound cloud account turn in it's grave. Your music is unironically dogshit, your samefagging is juvenile, and you're a wannabe dubbi who can't even hold a candle to him.**
Thankyou coward. Still waiting to hear your groundbreaking art.
>seething so hard you quoted an user in a completely different thread Kek
Tyler Young
... i am proper drunk seething, user ... most you guys know im always happy to help out, boost and interact. this guy hurt my pride and on Easter, no less!! i did enjoy being compared to dubbi tho.
Anthony Hernandez
Come one, don't turn another thread of these in another battlefield.
>dream pop >lush synths >mellotron >psychedelic >orchestral influence
This was my favorite in the thread. Maybe one of my favorites in a long time. It felt sparse enough in the right parts and the introduction of other elements (the little synth that comes in, the tambourine) was responsible for keeping my attention the entire time. Plus your voice is really nice.
This is legit amazing, if I had to say anything your vocals could use slightly more reverb to blend just a hair better but nah that was wonderful Pretty good track, and your playing is really fun. Vocals kind of ruin this one for me tho. They're just a little too weird with all that pitch shifting, and they're mixed too low. Instrumental is super creative Sounds pretty good, I would lower the volume of that pad though. Vocals are nice
dark as fuck and epic sounding. great progression throughout. little bird's chill af. I like that the sampling actually works in flow with the drums at point and doesn't feel separated like with many many tracks I've heard in these threads before f u
holy shit this is nice. I already posted ( ) but this had to be said
Gabriel Adams
bumping for a good (but bad) thread idea. it's only a matter of time before someone makes a new shillthread because their songs aren't on the top of the thread
Carson Morris
I'll give you one more bump then let this thread die before it reaches 30 replies because Yas Forums
rex: great mix, simplicity serves the song. I like the vocal style, fits with the vibe. The more dissonant chords add variety to the melody that is really refreshing. love the energy, would turn the music up way louder so that the screaming fits within the mix better, love the music a lot though sounds really fresh, would just slam it way up. bro I fucking love your shit, your tracks always hit so fucking hard, I'd love to do a track with you. Reminds me of death grips, love the blown out bass. inspired me to turn mine way up. sick shit. really warm vibe, really nice mix as well. The minor melody contrasts really well with the major home chord and creates a lot of dissonance. I really like it man, very cool.
distinct lack of "lofi" aspect; other than that - a perfect lullaby #7735 for a slow evening jumbled mess - seek help from a professional guitars could've been written by ai - vocals are alright at high notes, but jittery af. Clear your throat before recording or something + practice at holding notes (yes, it actually takes effort) a tad generic and lacking the personal touch hello, martians! breddy good composition (just a shame that the synthwave has burned itself out so quickly years ago). Also, nowhere near as dark as it should be for "darksynth"
