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my second EP

cmrv.bandcamp.com/album/visitantes-ep

soundcloud.com/c_m_r_v/sets/visitantes

>electronic
>aggressive
>idk what type of electronic

also my first EP

cmrv.bandcamp.com/album/goldcrest-ep

soundcloud.com/c_m_r_v/sets/goldcrest

my YT

youtube.com/channel/UCUP0cNMbngXQVN4_rOggzWw

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recs:

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soundcloud.com/lazy-eyelids/painted-nightmare

>postpunk
>freak bedroom
>downtempo
>experimental

heavy influence from Carissa's Wierd, Sparklehorse, Xiu Xiu, and Iron Maiden

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lol I literally just compared another track in this thread to the Dead Kennedy's but man you sound JUST like Jello

Incredibly boring and drawn out. Nothing of intrest nor worth staying the whole track for. Sounds like it's from the OST of a bootleg vidya game. Not good.
Incredibly loud for no real reason and the mixing is atrocious. Sounds like a wannabe X or Darkie. I'll give you the overall aesthetic is consistent and the flow is passable.
Sounds like my game boy sound system is on the fritz. Theres no substance to the track and it's 17 minutes longer than it needs to be. I will say that there is some interesting sounds, but you overuse them and it's just overly repetitive.
Very generic techno beat that's looped longer than my sick
Ambient isn't music, don't even try calling them songs
Actually good. The momentum of the track is excellent and its just overall a good experience. Nice job user.
The vocals don't match the instrumental and this isn't close to black metal. This isn't good, simple and clean. That 2nd singer is not good and it just feels as if I'm losing braincells listening.
The mix is bad, the singing, flow, and mastering is all too match. You really need more practice. I understand you're probably newer to this, so don't worry, there's a lot of room to improve, but really, you need ALOT of practice. You should ask people directly for help. Just find peers or people in the same boat as you and ask for advice and help. Id recommend giving people feedback and it's courtesy that they'll reply.

The same fucking bigass copy-pasted post every fucking thread. You should really spend more time on improving your music and less time shilling.

>im bein construcitve unlike u carebears xD

soundcloud.com/halfbakedhuman/dragon
>breakbeat
>electronic

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Maybe crap out some better shit next time and get over it

When you pretend to listen to an hour of music in 10 minutes.

where's yours
no point in reviewing or criticizing in such a dumb vapid way if there's no basis, context, or relationship to the reviewer

I've been leaving feedback on the actual tracks so maybe I should be leaving them here in the thread but do you have anything specific that I can start with in terms of how to fix the mix problems? I'm totally lost with this stuff I'm just tweaking knobs and ruining stuff then having to just say fuck it because I don't know how to fix what I fucked up haha

Techno guy here. The fact that you call my music very generic makes me think you don't know a lot about techno, which then makes me think that you maybe don't know shit about anything.

Please post your music so that we can put your critique into context. Thanks.

Dont need to shove your whole hand in water to check the temp if you can tell by one finger

soundcloud.com/retrogradeamnesia/the-meadows-demo-7/s-CiaZ6hQyZrq

>lofi indie
>psych folk

just realized I havent been posting the private link and now I feel retarded, still would greatly appreciate feedback on this demo

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Don't need to, you're the ones putting music online, subject to everyone's listens, not me.
>inb4 WELL HOW CAN YOU CRITIQUE IF YOU DONT MAKE MUSIC??!?!?!?!?
I found the best way to learn is through practice. Just take 1 audio recording, and just fuck with it as much as possible to find what sounds good. Doesn't even have to be something to release, but getting to know first hand is way better than advice

Based.
Cringe.

To clarify, just take the vocal file by itself, right? As in isolated from the instrumental?

>Hey guys here's my music check it out pls xoxox
>What do you mean you don't like it? Thats impossible. You suck and your critique is awful fuck you pig

Take the vocals and put them over an instrumental and find the perfect balance. You'll be able to tell when it's off

Nice strawmen, faggot. What made you so bitter? Failed to get plays on your shit music?

stop feeding the troll

soundcloud.com/user-241761817/semi-joke-13th-black-crusade-rap

wrote this mostly as a joke, but actually think it could be quite good
warhammer themed if you dont recognise it
im terrible at mixing and have a bad mic so forgive me

Never made music, just felt like reviewing some. Sounds like you're seething because I just didn't like yours

Half-Baked Human here , giving a listen to some of the tracks in the thread.

i like the drum work and sound selection
subtle nuances in bliss and carnage, i like it
great voice and guitar work

will listen to some more later

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To be honest, that's what I've been doing to no real avail. Guess it really is just practice until my ear hears things the right way. Maybe I'm too close to my microphone or something. Unfortunately, the interface I'm using doesn't really give me any gain control.

You're like that one """atmospheric""" drum and bass guy who insists his shitty mellow piano dnb is unique

It's not that.
It's just people like you think you're helping people and givin it like it issss, but all you do is bum people out, anonymously, in the one place where everyone's taking their anonymity away and bein vulnerable.
I just don't get the intent I guess. Maybe you're still growing up I dunno.
You didn't even quote me.

>wrote this mostly as a joke
Well is a damn good one

youtube.com/watch?v=1wxuV3Q9ADE&feature=youtu.be

>lyric video, dance-punk, humorous

will work through the thread giving feedback. I also started a feedback-focused thread

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soundcloud.com/mutant-919764543/feeling-so-good

>punk
>pop
>lo-fi
>demo

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soundcloud.com/sequencekiller/marauder
>New Industrial Drumstep song up now!
>New EP available now!
>industrial/horror inspired breaks and dnb
>feedback given and returned on SC
THANKS!

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>Theres no substance to the track and it's 17 minutes longer than it needs to be

That's not a 'track', it is a live performance, and the entire set lasted 23 minutes precisely.