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soundcloud.com/yunguglybastard/glass-accordian-prod-blank >Punk Rap/Trap >Loud Bass >Aggressive Hype Vocals Hope y'all enjoy! If you do, make sure to leave a like, repost, and or follow to show your support! All feedback and criticism is appreciated! I think the emotional direction should be changed. It seems like a sad/love song but it sounds like a book report. In order to sell your emotion, you got to force me to buy it, but when you're saying every bar with the same feeling, it doesn't click. The production quality isn't bad but the rest comes from you. Maybe don't overuse the high notes. Its impressive you're able to transition easily, but when overdone, it becomes null and almost pointless. Production Quality is good and the song isn't bad, but maybe don't rely so heavily on the high notes. I found Dawn to really be boring and unentertaining. Just one long noise wall with no substance or quality. It just fades in, ear rapes, then fades out. Add some heart into there, make it your own. It would be to the same effect if I just held down one piano note. At least go all in and add more sounds and instruments.
Really enjoyed this, super dynamic and consistently engaging through out, a lot more accomplished sounding than i was expecting.
Struggling to really give any critique on this one, only thing I can really think of is I wish there was more textural stuff going on, but that might be because I'm desensitized from listening to knackered old cassettes all day.
>Really enjoyed this, super dynamic and consistently engaging through out, a lot more accomplished sounding than i was expecting. Thank you, appreciate the kind words. The Camellia Girl is great, prefer it a bit more to Lost Email, but both are great in that lofi house sphere, everything is right about it. Worth revisiting, definitely.
>noise rock >gothic/dark >clean/screaming vocals >tribal noise/ambient section >sludge switchup
reccs Hört sich an wie als ob es ein Heinz gerappt hat lmao. Übe delivery und flow, die lyrics scheinen OK, nur ein wenig cringy. Der letzte Vers hat mir gefallen.