Give legitimate feedback and constructive criticism on tracks. Don't lazypost, samefag, or half-assedly insult someone's music but provide no actual reasoning on to why you dislike it.
Review/Critique Pt.2
Hudson Garcia
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Oliver Price
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>dream pop
>lush synths
>mellotron
>psychedelic
>orchestral influence
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Hunter Morris
darkmatternebula.bandcamp.com
the lq mp3 256 to yt version:
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>post-apocalypse
>industrial
funking funky. I'm not really into the vocals, they take away too much of the track when they come in. you can turn down the vocal volume a hell of a lot more and it can still be heard cause the brain picks up on speech super easy
Easton Mitchell
magicalflyingman.bandcamp.com
just made this, but would appreciate if you also listened to the other shit, particularly the son of man
>harsh
>ambient
>alternative
very nice production, though i guess i cant say much about the track since i dont like on avery island all that much. also listened to two years, very pretty track. feel like the vocals should either be clearer or even lower in the mix, right now theyre in an odd place. everything else is fantastic, no complaints
Chase Hughes
Prolly my favorite track off this surprise and quickly thrown together EP we did
>psych rock, indie, funky, jazzy, noisy, experimentalish, lush, lo-fi
Anthony Roberts
it's ok, imo the drums could be a bit more pronounced to give that 'umph' to the noise. also, more eq and stereo separation of the noise to make it more distinct from the drums wouldn't be a bad idea
Robert Sanchez
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>hip hop
>industrial
>noise
>electronic
>ambient
Been a while since I've listened to your work and I gotta say, this is a great cover. Enjoy the simplicity of the track. The pads and cool mini synth freakouts are very well done. Your voice is always pleasant as well.
Haven't listened to the full album yet, but the soundscapes on here are really great. Textured, noisy and constantly evolving.
Hunter Edwards
>drums could be a bit more pronounced to give that 'umph' to the noise
to clarify, I kinda meant sidechaining but I'm drunk so words don't come out exactly how they should
Samuel Gray
loved it, i think the vocals are fine, i guess its a matter of preference.
great sludge
Chase Harris
makes sense, ill see what i can do
Kevin Ortiz
thanks
the album's only 18 mins so when you have that time to spare, do it
you gotta work on your flow and better rhyme schemes dude. I don't know how else to help you.
how long did it take you to write the 'numb' lyrics?
Chase Mitchell
Will do.
and not long, the intention was to make a trashy, mindless track, so I wasn't really concerned with making the most complex rhyme schemes in the world. I am re-recording the second verse with a new flow though.
Andrew Jones
NEW SINGLE WITH VISUALIZER
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>emoviolence
>screamo
>short burst of energy
>high screaming vocals
OTHER SLUDGE/NOISE ROCK SINGLE
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>noise rock
>gothic/dark
>clean/screaming vocals
>tribal noise/ambient section
>sludge switchup
I really like the contrast between those atmospheric verses and then the funky hook. The vocal melody on the hook is well done and really catchy. good vocals and good production
yea i guess this is ok :/ it doesn't make my cytokine go BOOM
I expected a drop of some sorts, but the ending was tense in it's own way. I like the sublte use of electronics. I think I would like it more if it had a much fuller sound.
Levi Ross
>the intention was to make a trashy, mindless track
well, that worked but not in the way I think you wanted it too. not trashing on you, but, I mean, listen to all the industrial rap that's out there.
this isn't really a competitor in any way, shape or form.
Dominic Edwards
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>psychedelic rock/pop
>dream pop
>synthpop
Those flangey synths throughout are nice touches to make this sound spacier. I think the vocals could be just a little quieter or have less treble, they pierce through the drone very early on and I think this hurts the atmosphere set up since April 8th is a song about isolation. Otherwise this is a very good cover.
Oliver Ramirez
I’ve got no criticisms about this track, it’s honestly groovy af and really fucking funny, short and sweet and great!
This is some great work, my only criticism is probably something you already know, which is that I wish the production was tighter and would love to hear a version of this song with tighter production! Really enjoyed it!
Here’s my track, let me know what you think :^)
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Ian Fisher
no, I get what you're saying, and I'm not necessarily trying to compete with the current industrial rap scene. This is really the only "rap" song on the album and it might work better for you in the context of the album. Either way, thanks for the feedback
Christian Powell
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>punk rap
>loud/bassy beat
>aggressive vocals
Hope y'all enjoy!
I think the master should be improved a lot. The vocals aren't packing a true impact and if im being honest, it just sounds corny, unprofessional, and cringy. The instrumental isnt bad, but I can't take your vocals seriously.
The vocals should be edited a bit if you ask me, they sound muffled and incoherent. The energy is there, but it's not executed perfectly. The delivery sounds off at points as well, with cracking or change in tempo or the wrong note. Maybe add some variation to really make the loud really pop because just a wall of noise becomes bland.
Caleb Bailey
the storm really is coming soon
decay's pretty cool. I like the noisiness. wish there were some sick breakbeats on there
Adam Howard
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Here's a song I'm featuring on (i'm the first voice). The better mix is on spotify
production is super solid but I thought the vocals felt a little too much like you were reading them off of your phone.
Wyatt Flores
me^
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Ethan Hernandez
my second EP
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>electronic
>aggressive
>idk what type of electronic
also my first EP
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I liked this, I think you could add some distortion to the drums
John Perry
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>idm
>electronic
>glitchy drums
>ambience/soundscapes
Ethan Clark
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CONSOLEXIII
>drum and bass,breakcore and jungle
>ConsoleXIII
Raw stuff,enjoyed it,you got it man
Ayden King
no good feedback for this. it sucks. it's boring. it's never worth it to cry over exes.
Joshua Ross
What's with all the fucking rules? Faggot ass OP, holy shit. Half of making good music is being bad enough to break the rules.
This fucking low test bitch never broke a rule in his life, and that is why his music sucks.
Do less acid
Actually good
Soundcloud>bandcamp. If you are posting here, nobody wants to pay for your music anyways, so at least give them a soundcloud link.
It isn't the 60s anymore lol
I like the gloves
The vocals are pure autism
Everything about this is pure autism. Just focus on curing your autism before you try to ever make anything else.
You have potential if you just keep trying. But as of now, the production quality is a little muddy. Try cutting your low mids and not ramming everything into a master limiter without understanding attack and decay. Also, make more interesting sounds. Youtube is your friend.
I like the yelling and distortion
The song would have been better without you. The backing track is legit cool af.
If you don't know what type of music you want to make, then just give up. It doesn't have to be a genre, but it should at least be SOME type of electronic and you should KNOW that.
You like like the type of fag to send insta models creepy messages.
Andrew Hernandez
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>rap
The rapping sounds good a bit more energy would be nice but it's ok The beat on the other hand really takes away from the track sounds like a mes in my opinion just random percussion going of often off beat. A different type of beat would really be beneficial in my opinion.
Samuel Perez
in reference to this
Brayden Hernandez
'actually good' here
thanks
what's your project?
Henry Campbell
also
>The vocals are pure autism
filtered by emoviolence vocals isn't a based legit pro gamer move dog
Jaxson King
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>synthwave
>darksynth
>kinda metal?
This sounds amazing, but you gotta get a better mic to record with and try and mix the vocals a little better, they kind of overpower the mix, especially on Decay
production on this is great, personally I would change that melody line to make it click with your chords better, but a lot of that's just personal taste
This is actually dope as fuck, good job man. If I had to say anything, I would maybe change your 808 up a little more, add some fills and slides and such
John Peterson
>Rap
>Mashup
>Made while sleepless at 5am
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>Hype
>Mashup
>5am
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>Rap
>Mashup
>Bassy
>5am
Give me da truff
Andrew Green
RESPOND TO THE PEOPLE and then we maybe actually will listen to your 'mashups'
mashups aren't real music btw
Jack Flores
hey dickhead, go ahead and post your own music here so we can all gargle your cock and fondle your butthole over how perfect it is. This isn't feedback, it's just you shitting on folks because their shit doesn't click with you. Either participate or fuck off
Aiden Howard
You have already heard my music and liked it. Plus I already hit my promotion targets, and I don't really need any feedback, so there isn't really any reason for me to shill my shit on here anymore. I just feel like shitting up OPs thread because he keeps shitting up the board with his dumbass rules.
Owen Ramirez
>If you are posting here, nobody wants to pay for your music anyways, so at least give them a soundcloud link.
but i made it all free
David Gray
Nah I don't care about your opinion and I already hit my promotion targets so I won't post my music. I am just going to shit up this stinky thread.
Lucas Hernandez
t. mad cause an irrelevant person said 2,3 mean word about their sound waves.
grow a dick
Jonathan Bell
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>alt pop
>dream pop
>experimental
RECS
production is so good and falsetto voice sounds great man, only thing is i wish the drums hit a little harder on some parts
sounds like a galactic battle in a good way, some of the synths sounds arent my fav but the melodies are sick, love the art too
Camden Carter
Jack White
idk man, to me it sounds very derivative of other pop music. reminds me of some top 40 stuff from last year
Jacob Lopez
you could literally post your shit anywhere else but Yas Forums (reddit probably, idk, never been) and they'd probably like it a lot more then the people here. it's not really 'experimental' or 'alt'. it's boring poppy trap with sprawling vocals.
meh/10
Luke Ortiz
oh cmon, I want to know the legend who shat on all these people. at least pm me on sc
Henry Hall
what storm? heh
Elijah Clark
I feel the itch reaaaal bad
Nicholas Adams
Just pmed you ;)
Connor Martinez
as if its going through my skin into my cells
Sebastian Carter
postdays.bandcamp.com
>post-punk
>shoegaze
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Adrian Jackson
RESPOND TO PEOPLE FAGGOT
Brody Butler
Honestly this sounds good but the lyrics and video are cringe af.
Julian Richardson
Refer to Fuck off.
Michael Foster
and you respond to the shittiest track in the thread of a dude who was also a complete shill 3 mins after my reply to you.
no way I'm gonna listen to your music
Kayden Morales
Been following you for a while now, that track is cool very spooky
Love warriors of light, reminds me a bit of massive attack
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>electronica
>breakbeat
Isaac Wilson
Pure autism man here.
No thanks, thanks for the reply though.
Isaac Walker
You are the real faggot here, faggot.
Grayson Kelly
You're welcome
Charles Young
lmao
David Parker
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just got back into prod looking to improve
bless me with ur feedback
>dreamy trap
reccs
this is pretty good technically speaking but sounds pretty unimaginative like this could be literally any rapper ever in terms of the beat/lyrics. you have a good voice id say just make it more personal/use more emotion
Anthony Price
thanks for the recc mate
not really a fan of trap but i like the vaporwavy sound.
dasun is cool.