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once you are finished with this will you go to your local dog shelter and geonicde all of the pitbulls you see?

when you capitalize pitbull it makes it sound like you're talking about Mr. Worldwide

Its okay that smokey bit me. I know I came back with scars, and obviously you cared for me. There's nothing wrong with pitbulls. He bit me by accident.

A few of us were playing catch with him. The ball flew kinda close to my face and lept for it. I caught the ball and he bit my face. They are just very powerful animals. They can do harm without meaning to.

Has there ever been a mass killer of dogs?

0/10 you're barely literate and pit bulls are based anyways

What you should add is a practical plan for wiping them out. Get every pitbull and stuck them in a pit (fucking lol) so they'll maul each other to deah and when one is left standing shoot it.

That way you can distance yourself from most of the cruelty and prove your point at the same time since you only need to kill one dog.

there was that person mutilating cats in king county for a minute. Don't think they ever caught them either.

Fuck my spelling sucks been on coke all night and gotta work. Best of luck OP

You should pick a bigger target than dogs

Looks 100% serious

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landlords and bankers are ruining lives and all you care about are le quirky pitbulls

>the first word is "All"
>spelled correctly and capitalized
Not that I disagree with what you say but just pointing it out.

The title then. It should be "Pitbulls" not "Pitbull's"

Ah, yeah, I guess you're right then. Disregard my post I suck cocks

>manifesto
Lol so what you're to go commit a shitbull holocaust? Livestream it so we get so see you get wasted by the porcine patrol.

He gotta go full NZ

just drop some chocolate on the ground where they walk if you don't like them

Based, FUCK pitbulls. Seems a bit odd that's the subject of your first chapter though.

Your manifesto is trash. You clearly can't write.

if this was the first thing you thought worth discussing, i can't wait to see what the rest is like

>Pitbull's
>that for been
>their far more
>literally
>there are breed
would also like to mention the missing sentence pauses. I'm not an expert (or even an intermediate) in writing, but grammar is important. if it sounds weird when I read it aloud then I change the wording.

you're retarded.
>Pitbull's
does not need an apostrophe. It's plural, not possessive.
>your entire second run-on sentence is almost impossible to critique because it's so poorly written
do you mean: that "HAVE" been trained for centuries? you keep repeating "stupid and vicious". it is redundant. you keep saying "and" instead of using commas, periods, or semicolons.
>third sentence
it's EVERYONE around them. not "anyone" around them
>again, Pitbull's
IT'S PLURAL, NOT POSSESSIVE. YOU FUCKING RETARD. HOW DID YOU NOT LEARN THIS IN SCHOOL?
>therefore go on mauling anything in their sight
EVERYTHING not "anything."
>the only thing to do is not have a
why would you use the active verb "do" to refer to a passive state of being such as not having something?
>there are breed
BREEDS with an "S." Did you not learn plural nouns in school or are you just too stupid to understand the difference between plural, singular, and possessive?
>random comma
thanks for that, fucktard.

it's coming along great. your skills of argumentation are almost as weak as your writing skills. good luck finishing this garbage. i suggest finishing elementary school.