You have a comic pitch for me, Yas Forums?

You have a comic pitch for me, Yas Forums?

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A comic about 3 child minors who died during a cave in. The cave in shut down the town. But we fast forward the town and the re-open the mine but it releases demons floor. So Death seals the portal but demons flood the city, so death get the three lost souls of the minors and dangles heaven in front of them.


The minors take the deal, unfortunately nobody in the town can see them except this 20 something year old hipster who's mother was a medium who channeled ghost. Now they are fighting demons and the hipster girl slowly let's go of all the superficial stuff she likes and eventually becomes a politician to help the town. Each demon is related to a problem that was never fixed when the minors where a kid so when they defeat all ghost they themselves are at peace and can go to heaven.

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Aren't all children minors?

Yes. It's about Super Easy. He's barely an inconvenience to his foes.

Wow wow wow wow

Not minors as in their age. But minors as in occupation. Like twelve year olds grabbing pickaxes and going into a mine.

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It's spelled "miner" when referring to a person who works in a mine you dummy
"Minor" means child

so hear me out,
its just regular comics
but they have a massive orgy at the end of every issue

So your on my back, and what I'm going to need you to do is get all up off that.

I'll be on your back all day long you fucking mule

>So your on my back
It's "you're" a contraction of "you are"
You are on my back

Three guys get the power to swap their minds. Ones a conservative chad who's served in the military, another is a geeky centrist STEM student, and last is a liberal gay guy who's also an e-celebrity. They're being hunted by international spies, who want to study their latent psychic connection, so they must work together and create a bond between men unlike ever seen before.

Look these ghost are miners and I want the Audience to know that

You don't need to capitalize audience in that sentence, it's not a proper noun.

Okay. So what do you think?

I think you need to take a few seconds to proof read your posts if you want to be a writer.

Okay. Fair enough.

Tribal loli and a sorcereress fuck as they defeat skynet

Also the premise of your pitch is kind of interesting, reads a bit like a B.P.R.D./Hellboy type story.

I do have a question, is English not your first language? You type a bit like a few ESL speakers I know

I'm English just drunk and my phone is janky with the text

While B.P.R.D. is a government program this would be made on the fly and built up from nothing.

I meant in just a retro horror vibe kind of way.

I never thought of that. My shoe would be about self discovery. Each Demon relating to a miner past.
QlOne miners father was a drunk who benath him end up taking over the bank and now rules the town over the years.

One who liked a girl end up as an old spinster who is holding on to a huge land of property waiting for the miner to return home.

The last miner ends up being a great great grandpa to the hipster girl

>wojack
>brapfag
have you tried not being a retarded shitposter? it might be difficult but you could try

So the idea is an edgy cross-over event.
The basis is that The Purple Man gets Spider-man accused of rape sending shockwaves of a metoo movement across the Marvel universe.
Multiple heroes are accused of wrongdoing by female team-mates while other teams end up excluding female team-mates for fear of being accused.
It is made questionable if Spider-man really did rape her considering he has no memory around the time it happened and could not be accounted for the woman wasn't mind controlled, The Purple Man got a hold of a web shooter, put on a Spider-man costume and raped her.
He found Spider-man, made hide for 24 hours with no memory of those 24 hours while setting it up to look like he contacted a powerful psychic to wipe his memory to avoid a basic mind reading proving his guilt.
That psychic ends up dead and made to look like any number of other heroes killed them to protect Spider-man.
The victim has a test taken but then the results are compromised by heroes and villains alike looking to either protect or convict Spider-man.

The climax is the court case with Matt Murdoc representing the woman and She-hulk representing Spider-man.
She-hulk goes on about how some heroes acquired their super-powers: a chemical mishap or an innate genetic mutation, but some like her were a result of exposure to radiation.
She says that it can make them a mild threat to others by just being around them.
A funny thing though is that the defendant has radio-active spider-blood, but also other radioactive fluids, a unique radiological pattern that can be identified and that the victim showed no traces of such a pattern.

The joke is that the horrible comic where Spider-man killed MJ with his dick is actually turned into his defense.
Spider-man is acquitted, the purple man is caught and confesses but laughs because of all the hate and mistrust he caused in the Superhero community and even society in general.

Minors are TIGHT

Young people without jobs in a city run by corrupt politicians and gangs decide to start a vigilante justice business. Stakes get gradually higher as they gain reputation and support of the citizens of the city while the gangs and corrupt police doubles their efforts to crack down on their business. Climax of the story is how the vigilantes and the gangs have a massive final brawl in order to decide who will control the city.

Ending sequence heavily inspired by Crows Zero, link related youtube.com/watch?v=7kd2MfgZ7i0

Story about a man who gets cloned a bunch of times and they are all sent to live together in a town built for them. They are all identical, always wearing the same clothes, and having similar ideas. Plots are mostly comedic with him having to deal with him selves in different situations.

If it’s an adult comic, then the clones fuck.

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Sounds like a slightly "French existentialist sci-fi comic". I dig it.

A 12ish year old girl goes on adventures in an enchanted woodland with her companion and love intrest, a wolf like five times bigger then her.

WOOPSIE

he looks like that pedophile that Yas Forums posted a while ago.

A 12ish year old girl goes on adventures in interstellar space with her companion and love interest, a symbiotic organism that takes the form of a skintight suit with tentacles.