how would you fix RWBY?
How would you fix RWBY?
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lesbian sex scenes.
Take it away from RT and give it to anyone else.
Even Bendis would make better scripts for it.
Bring back Torchwick.
With a knife.
Ruby and Yang become lesbian lovers
>Even Bendis would make better scripts for it.
Let's not go saying things we can't take back user.
Resurrect Monty
Bring back Monty from the dead.
It would still suck but at least it would have Soul.
Give it to Japan after obtaining initial mainstream success.
Ideally, if Monty had lived, let him keep it.
Also, for me, it's Weiss Schnee.
Ruby grows a penis and fucks every female character she meets
this... it would piss off so many people. that and have the rest of the team sexually bully Weiss
Remove JNPR
kill off the Self-Insert that is Jaune.
trim the cast, as a whole actually.
make Grimm scary again.
Bendis would just take the show in the direction everyone wants it to go.
>Djinn: Ruby, you're gay.
grimm were never scary, they were always the designated cannon fodder
kill Bland
NAKED
MUD
WRESTLING
Nuke it from orbit.
Rename in to JNPR, swap RWBY and JNPR’s roles around.
>kill off the Self-Insert that is Jaune.
We don't have to kill Jaune, but we can probably cut some of his scenes.
And I have a friend who would love to see the whole Pyrrha's soul continues to live on in Cinder. I still think it's a potential, but I think he would prefer they already bring it up if they were gonna do it. Which is fair.
Give Cinder some goddamn backstory. At least *hint* at her motivations. So far all we know about her working for the angriest ex wife in fiction is "because powah."
Rewrite Adam and Faunas discrimination entirely. At least show it as being a consistent and pervasive problem. Adam needs an entire rework. The way he was treated massively irked me because he could have been a cool foil to Blake but that was sidelined for "lel muh edgy abusive ex boyfriend", completely forgetting about every other aspect of his character.
Lastly, I never woulda killed off Roman.
Yang has fire when she's "too hot", ice powers when she's "too cold" and dual wielding Fire and Ice when she's "just right".
For me the story and the characters are good for the most part.
But I think the anti-pantyshot stance is just tacky. If you're wearing skirts and flipping around that much its only natural your underwear is gonna show.
Other than that, some occasional fanservice wouldn't hurt either.
Okay...there's ONE thing I would've changed storywise. I kinda wish that Cinder had actually been killed by Raven Branwen for real. That would've been a nice twist in the story in that she died not even being able to fight Ruby.
keep it away from anybody on here
Go back in time and kill Monty before he was born
One thing I've learned is that RWBY is what I call a "Long Storyline". You'll get Cinder's motivation eventually. But don't be surprised if it turns out she's simply a big bad bitch.
I would introduce them to Mario and Luigi:
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fire every writer that didn't work on season 3
if those writers are already gone then it's beyond saving
so keep the same guys that have been doing it since then ok why do retards like this think Monty was the only guy doing the writing
Jaune barely does anything anymore. If anyone is a self-insert now, it's Ruby. All the main characters listen literally everything that comes out of her mouth and never question anything she says, even when she's blatantly wrong.
DON'T CUT BLAKE'S HAIR.
Remove most of the first season and some of the second season.
>lesbian sex scenes
Ew, no way fags.
Ruby is a Shit too.. but get the blonde moron out of there
What sort of dark, otherworldly spirit possesses people and makes them create cursed shit like this?
Well, the biggest problem is the system that the show was born into. RWBY is a product first and a piece of art second. You can't improve RWBY until that changes. The second biggest problem is that RWBY, the product, was sold on the hype of its fights. So, you'd either have to re-contextualise RWBY, saving yourself from the literal headache that is producing a long running show, on a budget, with multiple fights per season, release episodes at a slower pace or scale back the length of seasons and withdraw to episodes that were season one's length. The third biggest problem is the world of RWBY. It's a grimdark world, where the odds are constantly stacked against our characters. Unfortunately, the show is often bright and cheerful and was originally marketed as a kid's show. So, you either have to have the writing match the setting or have the setting match the writing. No more half-measures.
After solving those problems, you can then actually choose a team of people to lead the show. But the show won't ever improve until those problems are sorted. Doesn't matter if you hand it off to Japan or imagine yourself into a scenario where you are a multi-millionaire. You have to move RWBY away from being a product into being a work of art, you have to find a way to deal with the expectation of action and you have to have the setting and the writing match.
In my opinion, RWBY should be scaled back entirely and made into a series of short five-ten minute episodes that release once per month with bare minimum plot outside of a group of girls travelling remnant and fighting monsters.
every episode is 25 minutes long, that's literally it
Reboot at this point.
All the cool villains are gone or irrelevant, all of the story points have been done, even people who have been following it are getting tired.
Needs a clean slate.
Because it's clear the people doing the writing now are either not the same people they were when it started or required Monty to hold them by the neck to keep them from veering off into retard territory.
To be honest, I would consider RWBY volume 1-3 to be fine by themselves. They aren’t spectacular or noteworthy they’re simply fun to watch mainly due to the fight scenes and the antics, but the series started to go downhill by the start of Vol. 4 and onward.
Though if I were to fix RWBY then I would reboot it entirely while keeping resemblance to the series because the series at this point it’s just bad.
You can't. The awfulness is intrinsic to it's entertainment value.
Reboot and keep the cast at Beacon Academy. Cut out all the goddess and magic crap. Keep the tone upbeat like season one was. Force whoever is responsible for world-building to focus on fleshing out stuff immediately surrounding the characters like, you know, dust, that whole not magic powder that was never explained satisfactorily. Lastly, but most importantly, merge the show with RWBY Chibi by inter-splicing the cute skits they do into the main narrative.
That last point is the most important because I'm convinced RT is only good at writing short gag comedy sketches strung together along an aimless plot. That's their element. That genius was how they earned their fucking company. They have nothing meaningful or interesting to say when it comes to serious shit.
Kill original cast the entire show is on Taiyang trying to impregnate milfs in every kingdom and nation
Get rid of the male love interests and turn it into softcore yuribait show
Weiss should really just be naked the entire time.
>No bullshit maidens
>Relics are the main focus and muggifins for the series
>No Salem and Ozpin storyline, they are there but they dont know eachother.
>Roman and Neo are recuring villians
>RWBY are friendly rivals to JNPR
>JNPR is not the main focus.
>GRIM are just monsters controlled by instinct not by a Big Bad. They were created because someone used the relics irresponsibly
>Cinder and her squad are people trying to uncover the relics and use them to reshape the world in their image.
>Ruby slowly becomes disillusioned by the huntress life.
The unfortunate problem with your last point is that Roosterteeth is a subsidiary. The parent company has already made changes to the people involved from the start and will continue to keep making changes. Companies, such as Rooster Teeth, are husks that are being played like a marionette.
As a side note, I have a feeling that being a subsidiary company is part of the reason why Rooster Teeth keeps having controversies.
Neo spin off
Based.
Make it about Roman and Neopolitan doing wacky crime hijinks.
End it.
visible pantyshots
Keep the show going just to fund Chibi more. I can't believe the spinoff has a quality that just starts off consistently good and NEVER dips from there.
It seems like they're doing a better job with V6 and V7, not at all like the garbage dumps that were 4 and 5. But they will never be able to reach the actual quality 3 had.
Unironically, everything from Yang punching Mercury's leg to the rest of V3 is pure kino.
Start over and reboot with these changes:
>Having aura, semblances, dust, magic, ect all working on different poorly defined rules interacting with each other is confusing. Plan out how the magic system works in advance and keep it consistent.
>Same with individual powerlevels, the writers at least should know who is stronger than who. Maybe a mechanic to show the audience who is winning, like aura colors shifting through the rainbow from violet to red based on how depleted it is.
>Too many side characters. Having side characters like CFVY get a huge buildup only to disappear is confusing and getting JNR as permanent members distracts from the main cast and story.
>Know what characters are important in advance and focus on them. Day in the sun and other side story episodes are fine, but don't get distracted. Leave room in the story for unexpectedly popular side characters to reappear.
>The racism storyline is especially confusing- faunas are oppressed but we never really see it, and the girls happily slaughter their way through hundreds of them because... the racists are right and they really are plotting humanity's downfall? This needs to be completely reworked. How about having the racists be bad guys? City officials putting aura-suppressant drugs in the water supply for the fauna district or using them as a distraction for the grimm.
>Change Salem's name to Lilith. Start with all school characters being friendly and eventually learning there is a traitor among them. The reveal should be an actual surprise with a villain having a clear motivation beyond cinders "muahaha power"
Those are the ones i can think of off the top of my head at this hour.
Here’s a list of things that I would change:
Make the Hunters and Hunteress less OP.
Make the Villains interesting and explore their motivations to explain why they do what they do to make them somewhat relatable.
No ship baiting.
Make the Grimm terrifying something akin to demons and Monster from Bezerk. An unstoppable hordes that’ll rip humans and Faunus to shreds.
Abandon the whole Faunus discrimination aspect of the show because it doesn’t really go anywhere. To add to this make the White Fang a rebellion against the Five Kingdom due to their authoritarian rule which they’ll be labeled as terrorists.
I agree with this user especially with the last point of making Ruby disillusioned with the hunteress life due to being inspired by her Mother and her will to protect other. It’ll be interesting to see Ruby learn her Mother wasn’t a Great Hunteress others make her out to be.
Have Cinder be portrayed as a friend to Ruby. Preferably the first person she meets when she arrives at Beacon Academy. Then along the way we get a glimpse of their philosophical differences up until Cinder betrays her best friend and reveal her allegiances to Salem.
Have Yang be jealous of Ruby and be a rival.
What do you think anons is this list cringe or Kino?
Most are Kino. Always was a mark for the "hero and villians were once friends but due to different philosophies they become enemies"
Honestly, I'm fine with a lot of stuff like the Maidens & Shit, I just think they need some minor rewriting so they existed from the start of the series & not just some sudden idea Monty came up with and didn't tell the entire team about for a while.
Same with a lot of other stuff about RWBY, what's there is perfectly fine, you just gotta give it all a second draft, expand on some aspects like Ruby being a Gun Nut or RWBY & JNPR
Also, the idea of Ruby getting disillusioned of the Huntress life & falling into personal issues from Beacons Fall onwards has always been my HC so its Kino to me. She realizes shes way in over her head, but now she's got no choice but to cling to everything she's learnt from people in her life like Qrow, Taiyang, and the teachings Ozpin imparted on her at Beacon about being a leader to desperately try & keep things going, it flourishes into an obsession to maintain hope amongst Remnant that spurs her to lie to Ironwood in V7.
She becomes just like those she admires, Qrow, Summer, Taiyang, except in the worst ways possible.
Ah, good thing you brought that up since the main inspiration behind Ruby and Cinders Friendship idea was derived from Xaviers and Charles friendship.
Interesting addition to Ruby’s deterioration psyche, it would make sense for her age to be traumatized or have a moment where she’s overwhelmed mentally from the cold reality of being a hunteress.
Also the point about focusing on other characters from both team RWBY and JNPR would improve the series. One of the things I liked about Vol. 4 was that it focused on other characters other than Ruby in different locations dealing with their personal problems. You have Blake at Menagerie, Weiss at Atlas and Yang at Patch.
You could point out that each adventure were pointless or disappointing, which I get the writers could’ve done it a lot better. But if RWBY were to be rebooted then you could flesh out the characters like Jaune who is basically just the comedic relief nowadays and expand on Ren and Nora’s relationship along with Pyrrha’s mental stress of dealing with fame and the high expectations from her family.
Give it to people who can actually animate, or actually write, or at the very least pick a better leading cast.
Yeah, I'd just love it if a RWBY Reboot just had a few episodes dedicated to other characters throughout its Volumes.
>Roman & Neo on a night out
>Sun enlisting the help of Neptune to help steal something
>Jaune & Pyyrha training
Or hell, go even crazier
>Freshly signed on White Fang Soldier
>Life as a Butler in Schnee Manor
There's so much good stuff. Hell, I've been toying with the idea of a musical episode too.