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BURGER MURDER (~5-issue miniseries): April 18th, 1987. That was the date when 22-year-old Eric Aidensfeld Cornwall was murdered by an unknown masked criminal and his heavily armored assailant by the corner of Harvard and Main Street in Providence, Rhode Island. Naturally, being the head chief of the Rhode Island Police Department, Commander Edward Verming is tasked with solving this mysterious case. Along the way, he stumbles across several strange characters, including to, but not limited to a part-time burger-flipping fry cook with big dreams to be a musician, a hardened Vietnam veteran who runs a maximum security prison with an iron fist, a world-renowned neurosurgeon with a knack for woodworking and metalwork and a deranged mental patient who believes the Earth is under attack from demonic forces. Worst part is, each suspect has their own take on the murder, and Verming has to put together their puzzle pieces in order to solve one of the most absurd murder-mysteries of his time.

Quick elevator pitch

Gertrude from I hate Fairyland with the powers of pic related and the tick go from Universe to universe saving worlds that don't have Heroes in them that desperately need them. they somehow get caught up in a plot that involves the end of the Multiverse

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Does anyone else find sam hyde annoying at this point

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I don't pay any attention to him. All I know him from are memes. Similar to how I treat Eric Andre. I pretend they don't exist and they don't influence my life.

The struggles of babysitting.

How would this fight go down? Could Supes take the three of them? Hell, would he even be able to fight a little girl?

I'm assuming this would take place in the Injustice universe or he was brainwashed perhaps, but I think they couldn't actually hurt him. it'll be like a child actually fighting an adult, but he'll snap out of it soon if he actually does slight damage to them. if this was the Injustice universe he would probably kill them or go full Dick Hartley and make an army of them.

I say actually too much.

Would read

In an alternate universe was superhero showed up in the 1930s, in modern time superheroes has became a lucrative business. essentially the comic is what if the Avengers were vapid social media influencers they also have to save the world. they have to make their fights look interesting but also save people and not screw up or their public favor could wane

A super futuristic cyberpunk world tries to invade a magical fantasy world to steal their resources. the comic follows some Heroes in the Magic World fighting back against the invasion.

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The Lolifier. A man wakes up one day with the ability to identify pedophiles, but is cursed with the knowledge that he discovers his entire family are pedos.

Being a pedo is pretty normal, desu

A dysfunction of superhero family/ team fight Doom Patrol type villains by that I mean weird shit.

I'm not the op but I actually find these threads fun because they allow me to flex my credit muscle and help me write by getting proper criticism for my ideas that my family doesn't want to listen to or doesn't understand.

>proper criticism
>Yas Forums
Yeah bro ask the coombrains for literary advice

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Yeah that's mainly why go to TG to be honest. they may also be coomer's but at least they know when there's a good story when they see one

A supervillain get isekaied into a fantasy world where humans don't exist but all your generic fantasy races exist. He stops werewolves from murdering a tribe of halflings (which in this world they are like the Sami people but dwell in forests and constantly were Jawa hoods and stuff). After he leaves and goes to a cave to get his bearings he sees that the tribe is sacrificing a virgin in his honor he doesn't know this cuz he can't speak the language he just thinks they're going to murder her so he stops them and rescue the girl. He takes her to his cave and from that day she believes he chose her to be his prophet. essentially the story is this guy's with superpowers is going around a word that doesn't have them and people thinks he's a god but he doesn't know this cuz he can't speak any of their languages.

Heroes from different universes are sent to a game world where they're being haunted by the best hunters in the Multiverse for sport

I think the last one I got Fallout but in a fantasy world that it.

The last man on earth goes back in time to stop the apocalypse, but in the end, he causes it, with his abilities growing to have superman ques abilities, the apocalypse happens in 2012 killing billions except his past self, however, he just grows again to do the same thing

A guy spent the apocalypse in a flimsy wooden shed jerking off to hentai doujinshi. He did this for so long that radiation levels outside the shed decreased enough for him to emerge, and try to cross the wasteland of marauders and irradiated monsters to get to Japan, but he gives up halfway and comes back to his shed. During his absence a village of literal retards has cropped up, and he makes himself their leader. A few more years pass, and eventually a spaceship lands, pertaining to carry the rich and powerful from where they where hiding away from the nukes on a space station. The retarded take off their disguises to reveal themselves as the actual rich and powerful and vice versa, but unfortunately nobody has any doujins our hero hasn't already jerked off to. He has to put up with a movie starlet harem instead.

In a world filled with monsters, magic, aliens superheroes and villains, a NEET who just recovered from a suicide attempt accidentally finds out that all of it is really an elaborate worldwide Truman Show-style simulation run by Earth's governments to distract the populace from the rapidly dwindling resources and a sun that's just a decade or so away from going supernova. He ends up torn between revealing the truth, or using his knowledge of how fake everything is (no one is ever really killed in the various sci-fi 'catastrophes') to become a hero and celebrity. Each arc would take place within one year, with our protagonist becoming a successful normie, then a celebrity, then a hero, then a villain, then having his two forged hero/villain identities fight, and then discovering that others have also seen through the deception.

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A superhero deconstruction story, basic but this is how it goes

>a young boy gains the powers of a bat, becoming the batman of this world
>he fight crime privately however is stopped by the police,
>to his surprise, a judge comes in telling him if he wants a career in crime fighting, he needs to work with a group or get a brand.
>This later involves him becoming very powerful and a olderman, based upon superman, will take him in for the Crime Fighters, only to rape the main character, taking advantage of his liking to superheros.
>They will later continue to fight crime,but the main character will notice how lazy and lack of care they are, joining the Crime fightere
>he will also notice they are very digusting according to this very conservative society, caused by the superhero culture.
>This will later on involve a real super villain who will kill half of new york for no paticular reason.
>The superman ques character, will be horrified, and explain to the kid he has been sexually abusing that villians are all add bought privately to embezzle money from taxes
>A final fight occours where the man will have no visible body parts, showing only black mask.
>he says how its funny how much we NEED the heros, before giving the main character an option, put away his life, or die with the Supers.
>MC desides to commit suicide, after realising how his life has been a joke

will add more if yuo want

The PPGs are broken as shit, they’d stomp Superman in seconds.

Every town on earth has a hero who watches over them. These heroes range from tier 1, barely powered schmucks who watch over suburban housewives, all the way up to tier 10, reality manipulating world breakers responsible for the safety of millions. Average humans are happy to live like ants in an ant farm, watched over by their benevolent protectors. But a petty squabble between tier 10 heroes leaves the lives of billions at risk- until an unknown young hero emerges from an idyllic small town, a hero, whose powers go all the way up to 11.

A comic about a young kid who will become the father of time travel gets kidnapped by his teenage daughter from the future. his future self is on trial by the time police and may get erased from history because too many people are creating holes in the timeline with his technology. So the kid and his future daughter goes on time-traveling Adventures and try to fix the holes in the timeline. The girl being his daughter is a late reveal in the series at first were led to believe she is just his assistant. ( also she kidnap him because she's too dumb to figure out time travel and perhaps his past self is better which is a correct assumption)

>Not inspired by the books of Homelock Sher (Bizarro wearing a cape and deerstalker hat) Bizarro wants to not learn how to be a bad detective
>He looks for the worst detective of all to not teach him
>He goes to Gotham and asks a random person if he's seen "Man-Bat"
>The random person is coincidentally Kirk Langstrom
>Kirk (intimidated by Bizarro) takes his Man-Bat formula, which transforms him into the savage bestial Man-Bat
>Bizarro and Man-Bat try and solve a case
>Turns out to be a scheme by Egg-Head (Based on Vincent Price)
>With Batman's help, they defeat him
>After this, Man-bat reverts back to his human form, Batman takes him to the hospital
>Kirk wakes up in a hospital bed and is thankful that the only people he hurt were Egghead and his goons
>Bizarro then visits him (with a bouquet of weeds) and calls him "the worst detective in the world"

One chinamen from the 26th century returns to 2032 to stop his fellow man from eating the cursed deer mouse. Only to discover that trump has nuked china. How will chang find his way in this post chinaman world?

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I had a dream where teenaged versions of the girls were confirmed for Injustice 3 and they worked similar to the ninja turtles in 2. According to my dream they were part of the DC universe the whole time and when they were children, they were sent to the Phantom Zone by Superman because he feared they’d be stronger then him and collapse the regime, also he killed the professor when he refused to make super soldiers for him.

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A vigilante group that runs like organized crime. Imagine a team of batman punishers in a suburban town that targets not just criminals but corrupt politicians and predatory pastors. Use of surveillance to gather evidence is part of every story. They use rubber bullets, batons, and martial arts on targets who don't deserve death, only correction. Most of the vigilantes are active duty cops and military veterans. Their plan is to subvert criminality by becoming the biggest criminals.

This concept already exists, it's called Tiger and Bunny

A Royal pair of twin elves come into our universe and gets hooked on mindless entertainment, junk food, the internet, and the ease of modern society and they becomes a neets. a year later a group of adventurers from their world are set into our world to get them back but they don't want to go back so they have to convince them to go back it's a slice of Life comic.

So I didn't make tiger & bunny something can have the same plot as something else as long as it's executed in a different way.

This I believe. this user clearly doesn't remember just how strong the girls are.

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Justice League Unlimited but it's shot like the office and is usually when th the heroes are off Duty It's A Slice of Life workplace comedy with dramatic elements sometimes. also every character is a legally distinct character but it just so happens wink to resemble other characters mostly superheroes but some cartoon characters an indie Comic characters Maybe resembled but not actually being that character ;-) if you catch my drift.

Yes I know how strong they are but I think you're under estimating the strength of Superman

The superhero comedy about a way to nice and dumb teenage girl with a cosmic entity as a suit that gives her powerful abilities

Tens of thousands of years before the events of the series A Ancient Cosmic entity is framed for something and is stripped of his physical form essentially making it a ghost hes forced to walk the universe for years being unseen by everybody. eventually he comes across some happy go lucky girl that has the ability to see him she makes a deal with him and he's now a suit that she wears that give her doctor strange like abilities

The Illuminati is real; it's existed for thousands of years; it's manipulated most of history; and it currently controls most of the world.

They're also horribly mismanaged, understaffed, burdened with paperwork, muddled with bureaucracy, and the branches can't coordinate.

The intrigue focuses in a city of confusing architecture and faceless crowds. The Illuminati want to tighten their control on the city as part of a master plan - before those jerks from the Lizard People branch can beat them to the punch. But really, their boss is more interested in slacking off.

Individual plots include:
>The Illuminati uses their advanced spy network to discover secret video game techniques
>The Illuminati helps an extraterrestrial blend in, eventually ending with a positive message about how the alien just has to be himself
>The Illuminati have to transport a woman who's a sleeper agent for seven different organizations, with multiple personalities set off by common words
>The Illuminati have to provide for an incredibly needy diva so that she'll sing their mind-control song; it only gets worse when they discover she's a hologram
>The Illuminati's attempts to hide their boss' diary spirals into a rumor that they're hiding WMDs
>The local Illuminati branch and the Lizard People branch get into petty squabbles over who can build the highest mind-control radio tower; who can sell the most Onions Green; and who can fake a more impressive space mission
>An intrepid reporter and conspiracy theorist falls deeply in love with a leading Illuminati member
>Due to lack of resources, one agent has to fake being 200 workers in a front organization
>The shadowy headquarters is in need of better lighting; The Illuminati begin a bureaucracy-muddled, secretive mission in a quest to acquire new lightbulbs
>The Illuminati set up a numbers station to help their boss cheat at a math quiz
>The conspiracy theorist unravels an elaborate cover-up: a birthday present for their boss

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I guess that depends on which Supes we're talking about. DCAU Supes wouldn't last a minute, for instance.

A superhero gets put into a cryogenic pod by a villain right before the Multiverse collides in on itself couple thousand years later the hero is awoken by gremlin woman and together they travel across the The Last Remnant of the Multiverse

The All Japan Magical Girl Defense Force uses a special power-giving beam to bestow magical powers upon girls they've observed to be good-hearted enough to become magical girls. One such good-hearted girl happens to pull out a compact and check her makeup at the exact moment they shoot the beam, and the class' delinquent is given the powers instead. She turns out to be the strongest and most effective magical girl on the Force, despite being shunned and picked on by the other magical girls. I have the first 'arc' planned out, but seeing as I can't draw I'll probably just write whatever the western equivalent of a light novel is and then never get published.

I've brought this up in those "pitch an anime" threads in Yas Forums before but why not? I might do something with it some day anyway.

Japanese otaku/fujo woman gets trucked or whatever and isekaied. However she ends up on an alternate version of Earth around 15 years in the past in the body of a white American girl. Turns out this girl was intended to be a magical girl who was supposed to fight against an evil threat to her world but died before actually awakening. So it's up to the MC, a Japanese girl in a foreign country in the past, to fill the role of the girl whose body she's now in if she hopes to ever return home.

It'd still be a story played largely straight but it'd also be affectionately poking fun at early/mid 2000s youth culture, especially weeb culture. MC, being Japanese, basically comes off as a giant weeb. Her mahou shoujo look would have an emo/mall goth/Misa cosplay vibe to it. The villain group she's fighting against is called Σ-41. Lots of pop-punk and other things like that. I hated a lot of that stuff at the time but now being so far removed from it I look at it kind fo nostalgically so it'd all be earnest and in good fun instead of nod and wink ironic mockery.

Kid land a short six-issue miniseries

Years after a strange virus spread arcross the world earth is left desolate and it seem that the only survivors are children under the age of 13 and once you reach 13 you mysteriously vanish. The world is controlled by various kings and queens (which are just archetypes like the jock the nerd the goth girl the rich girl) our hero is Jude a tough-as-nails tomboy who travels the Wasteland righting the wrongs she also happens to be 12 and a half spoiler alert yeah the virus doesn't kill you it turns you younger it also erases your memories it's a botched immortality serum. the Apocalypse happened hundreds of years ago everybody just thinks it happened a couple years ago because the adults got their memories erase and turn into children and the children told them that the apocalypse happend a few years ago and then when they got old enough they turned into children and had their memories were erased so the new kids tell them that the apocalypse only happened a few years ago on this kept going on.

Final boss

A Slice of Life action comic about a Simple Man who accidentally killed the final boss and must become the new final boss and fight against heroes and villains Across the Multiverse so they may get the status final boss but if you lose he dies. every time he fights he get XP which makes him stronger and give him new powers. he has a choice to either kill or spare his opponent he always spares them which means are stuck on his world until someone beat them they usually just become if side character that don't fight him anymore or they straight up become as friends. the main character is pretty much saitama except he's not overpowered.

Foundation: the series

Trigger treat

The series is as follows:
When the Moon strikes the “Shocking Grin” on October 31st, the Haunting scavenger hunt begins and Monsters from all over the world hidden from humans must compete to find all 7 keys to Cyborgula’s Castle Where he is the final challenge. And whoever defeats Cyborgula will be able to have to have anything they desire.

The main character is “Grimm Shady” a mercenary for hire who crashed in a middle of a human Cuckold party, Killing everyone when a message appeared in one of the bulls foreskin says that he is invited to the Haunting Scavenger hunt.

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Deathgrip. A man with the power of killing anyone who touches his penis. He can never have sex but can masturbate.

Loser hacker gets entrapped in the grimy underground world of snuff films and other unspeakable things that shouldn't appear in the screen.

>Superman grabbing Blossom by the throat
jeez isn't that a little much she just a little girl

My comic pitch is literally too esoteric and self-referential to ever work, and it's filled to the brim with my own mental problems.